This is Nyree's draft copy.
On a hot sunny day Ben the diver jumped into the deep blue sea to find treasure. Ben swam through the coral in the black water. When he jumped into the cold water he saw an octopus with mean beady eyes lying on a bright blue box.
He tried to pull the octopus off the broken, sandy box but the octopus tentacles were wrapped around tightly.
Then Ben said “Hey whats that box? I wonder if there is any treasure in there?”
He peaked around the box and suddenly the octopus began choking Ben and they started to fight in the swirling, white cloudy water.
Then Ben tied the octopus long sticky tentacles into knots and pushed him off the broken sandy box. When Ben pushe the octopus off the box he lifted it up and suddenly he saw golden glittering treasure.
Ben was excited, he was rich!