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Tom the deep sea diver dived into the cold deep blue sea that was swirling like a tornado. Tom swam cautiously throught the seaweed in the cold water. He swam to the bottom. When he stopped he saw a huge octopus with mean eyes and 8 stretchy long tentacles.
The octopus wrapped his sticky tentacles around the dusty old box. Tom was excited, his heart was pounding as he tried to get the octopus tentacles off.
Suddenly the octopus let go of the treasure box so Tom tangled the sticky long tentacles into knots and pushed the octopus into the deep sea.
He opened the treasure box and found gold, golden money and jewels.
He was surprised and he realized that he could be rich. “Yeah! Yeah! I can be rich” he screamed. He couldn’t believe it, it was his first time.
He swam back up for fresh air and carried the chest with him and shared it with his friends.