This is Nyree's draft copy.
On a
hot sunny day Ben the diver jumped into the deep blue sea to find
treasure. Ben swam through the
coral in the black water. When he
jumped into the cold water he saw an octopus with mean beady eyes lying on a
bright blue box.
He
tried to pull the octopus off the broken, sandy box but the octopus tentacles
were wrapped around tightly.
Then
Ben said “Hey whats that box? I wonder if there is any treasure in there?”
He
peaked around the box and suddenly the octopus began choking Ben and they
started to fight in the swirling, white cloudy water.
Then
Ben tied the octopus long sticky tentacles into knots and pushed him off the
broken sandy box. When Ben pushe
the octopus off the box he lifted it up and suddenly he saw golden glittering
treasure.
Ben was
excited, he was rich!
By
Nyree