Sunday, May 16, 2010

Khaia's tells all about volcanoes.

This is Khaia's first attempt at making her own recording on her own. She tells all about what happens when a volcano erupts. She uses some really descriptive language. Well done Khaia.

9 comments:

  1. wow very confident reader you are Khaia.
    well done.

    xo mum and dad

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  2. Hi SIS!

    I like the short story about how a Volcano erupts.It has heaps of detail on it. Great stuff! I will see you after school.

    From Shoal

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  3. Awesome description and reading of how a volcano erupts...excellent work...keep it up and looking forward to seeing more of your work.

    Love Aunty Toa (Australia)

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  4. great work Khaia great description of the volcano erupting very exploding story look forward to hearing more Well done!!!!!!
    love aunty n leanne n Oushen..

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  5. Well Done Khaia

    Really great to hear about the Erupting Volcano...Keep up the Good Work !And what a confident reader you are .

    Love from Lincoln and Amanda

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  6. Awesum Khaia...keep up the good work...well done...love Lisa n Phil

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  7. Aunty Rina & PhoenixJune 6, 2010 at 4:57 PM

    YAY, loved listening to your story about volcanoes, & love your descriptive words as well! You are doing great Khaia, so proud of you ! Lots of love

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  8. Hi Khaia
    Great work. That was a very intersting story.I like all of the detail that you have put in your story. I like that you have used diffrent types of words for your sentences. Can't wait to read more of your intersting story's.

    from your friend Ashleigh

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  9. Khaia's reflection:

    I like my story because I used interesting words in my story. I can make it better if I read my story slowly and not rushing it!

    Khaia

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