Thursday, November 13, 2014

Chloe's weekend story

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Every week Class 16 write about our weekend story all on our own. Have a listen to see what Chloe did this week. If you like her story please leaver her a comment.

Wednesday, November 12, 2014

Pisrina's Spring Story

Pisirina really loves spring time. Listen and find out why. If you like her story please leave her a comment.

Pisi Spring Time from Team 1 PES on Vimeo.

Levonah's Spring story

Levonah loves to write and has lots of details in her stories. If you like her story please leave her a comment. Is there any advice you could give her about her recording?

Levonah Spring Time from Team 1 PES on Vimeo.

Manaiakalani Film Festival - Toby the Dragon

Marika wrote this story and she decided to create a movie out of it. The story teaches us about being friends with all sorts of different people. Caleb and Toby drew the pictures and some special friends were asked to do the acting.


PES Mackinlay Dragon from Team 5 PES on Vimeo.

Tuesday, November 11, 2014

Toby's Spring story

Toby loves to write, and always has lots of ideas he writes about. He really likes using comma's to join his ideas together. Is there any advice you could give him about using commas?

Toby Spring Time from Team 1 PES on Vimeo.

Sonnia's Spring Time Story

Sonnia loves spring time. Have a listen and find out why. If you like her story please leaver her a comment.

Sonia Spring Time from Team 1 PES on Vimeo.

Josh's Spring Time story

Josh is getting so much better at recording.  If you like his story and can think of something that can make him even better please leave him a comment.

Josh spring time from Team 1 PES on Vimeo.

Piripis spring story

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Piripi added lots of details to his story. His story just got better and better as he kept listening, improving and recording. He has even got a lovely smile at the end. If you like Piripis story please leave him a comment.
Class 16 are practising how to Learn, Create, Share. We gained inspiration for Spring by walking around outside with our friends, our iPads and our whiteboards. We learned more by looking in books and on the internet. We created our own stories. Then we recorded our stories with our friends. We listened with our friends to see if it was a good story and a good recording. We reflected on it and then re-crafted our story. We love working together.