Tuesday, November 11, 2014

Toby's Spring story

Toby loves to write, and always has lots of ideas he writes about. He really likes using comma's to join his ideas together. Is there any advice you could give him about using commas?

Toby Spring Time from Team 1 PES on Vimeo.

1 comment:

  1. What a fantastic storyteller you are Toby!
    Great use of your commas to keep me interested in what might be coming up next!
    Love Mum


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