Wednesday, November 27, 2013

Makayla's forest story

Makayla wanted to type her story like a real book, all on her own. If you like her story please leave her a comment.

On a sunny day there was a family of four that was going camping  in  a leafy forest. Suddenly they saw a broken  bridge  that leads they’re  way  to their camping spot. Sadly, now they  can't  go camping. Then one of the daughters saw the sign saying  ‘Do not go here there are  snakes!’ Then she ran to tell her family. They ran quickly because  they were scared, and they were saying “Argh”. The family said we are never going camping again!

By Makayla


  1. This is a great story. My children would run away from snakes too!

  2. Great story Makayla. You are very good at writing stories. Good work with the speech marks, they make the story much more interesting.

    Keep it up!


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