Saturday, March 12, 2011

Venetia's picnic story

The whole of Pt England School had a picnic. Venetia explains why she had such a great time. Lovely writing Venetia.
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5 comments:

  1. hi venetia it's alice well done for your sory

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  2. HI VENETIA IT'S ALICE I LIKE YORU MOVIE KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK.

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  3. HI VENETIA IT'S ALICE AGN I LIKE YORU MOVIE IT IS SO LOVELY.

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  4. HI VENETIA IT'S ALICE I LIKE YORU MOVIE KEEP UP THE WORK YOU ARE LOVELY.

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  5. Kia Ora Venetia - You told me you wrote a good story about the school picnic!!
    I loved your clear reading voice, and the part where you described being wet because you used a powerful word to describe that.
    Keep thinking of the powerful way to describe things you want to write about.
    Tino pai - Miss Wild

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