Sunday, August 8, 2010

Marilyn's pirate

Marilyn has done a great job of changing her characters appearance she has also changed his personality then written a new paragraph about where he went. Well done Marilyn. Keep up the great work.


  1. Hey Marilyn,

    Awesome work. I liked your voice it was clear enough to hear. Keep up the awesome work

  2. Wow Marilyn that was a great story and iI have to agree with Raenan your voice was really clear. Keep up the good work.



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