Thursday, September 24, 2009

A Beach Story

Shalom has described a beach scene that he
saw on a picture. He has used interesting word
groups to make his ideas clear for the


  1. That sounds like a fantastic day Shalom. I could really imagine it. Well read!

    From Tom Glaze

  2. Hi Shalom, I love the way you read your story. It was nice and clear! You also used very interesting words in your story! Do keep it up!

    Mrs She


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