Talofa Shalom,Wow what an amazing piece of writing. You are really good at retelling one of my favourite fairytales, Cinderella. I liked the way you read with a nice clear voice. Keep up the good work Shalom and i can't wait to see more of your work on your blog.Love Mrs Tuala
Hi ShalomWe really loved to hear the part in your story that told us how you waved your magic wand.From Ms Glaze
Dear ShalomI liked your Spooky Night story and how you read with a clear voice.From Sosaia
Dear ShalomI liked it when you said "Hi my name is Shalom" it was great.From Sela
Hi Shalom,I really love your story.you have described it really well.Are you still going to finish off your story or are you going to finishit later.Well keep up the fantastic work.you are doing really well.God Bless.By Joshua.
Hi Shalom,Good on you Shalom,keep up the good work.I am so proud of you.
Dear Shalom,You sounded very mature when you read your story. I really enjoyed listening to you. It was such a well read story that I wanted to hear more.Keep up the good work.From Mr Jsrman
Well done! Shalom,I like your clear speaking voice and your very good written story. Keep it up!Mrs She
Dear Shalom,Your work looks so amazing.i AM GLAD THAT YOUHAVE DESCRIBED YOUR STORY WELL.kEEP UP THE GOOD WORK.GOD BLESS.bY Joshua
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