This is Lucy's first attempt at recording her own work and I think she has done a really good job. She tells you all about what happens when a volcano explodes.
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I like my story because it has lots of interesting words like--' the plate bumping together' and ' boiling hot lava'. and my mum is proud of me! I can make my story better by writing longer story.
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ReplyDeleteBeautiful drawings Rm6, great job.
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Good reading, Lucy, That is very interesting how a volcano starts and all that lava sure sounds hot. Well done.
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Lucy's reflection:
ReplyDeleteI like my story because it has lots of interesting words like--' the plate bumping together' and ' boiling hot lava'. and my mum is proud of me!
I can make my story better by writing longer story.
Very smart Lucy, Great Work!
ReplyDeleteYou give me a better understanding about how Volcanoes work =) AWESOME!
Xx Michaels Mum =)