Hi Noah, I really liked your voice over about the immersion assembly. You had a lot of detail in your writing and you should be well on your way to have your writing in books and blogs!
Hi Noah , I like the way you read your story in a steady voice. And you used cleaver words . You are a big boy to do that . your Mum and dad done a comment on your blong to you Love from April
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ReplyDeleteI really liked your voice over about the immersion assembly. You had a lot of detail in your writing and you should be well on your way to have your writing in books and blogs!
From Ashlee
Hi Noah its me Ajani I love the voice it sounds magnificent keep up the good work best friend.
ReplyDeleteLoved your interesting story, fantastic delivery and great smiles. Love Mum
ReplyDeleteHi Noah , I like the way you read your story in a steady voice. And you used cleaver words . You are a big boy to do that . your Mum and dad done a comment on your blong to you Love from April
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