Thursday, September 24, 2009

A Beach Story


Shalom has described a beach scene that he
saw on a picture. He has used interesting word
groups to make his ideas clear for the
audience.
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2 comments:

  1. cglaze@ptengland.school.nzSeptember 28, 2009 at 8:35 PM

    That sounds like a fantastic day Shalom. I could really imagine it. Well read!

    From Tom Glaze

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  2. Little Voices, Little Scholars.October 16, 2009 at 12:45 PM

    Hi Shalom, I love the way you read your story. It was nice and clear! You also used very interesting words in your story! Do keep it up!

    Mrs She

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