Sunday, August 2, 2009

The Fairy Godmother.


Shalom is from Room 6 and he has been learning
about Fairy Tales. Listen to him read his retelling
of his favourite part of the Cinderella story.
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9 comments:

  1. Mrs TualaAugust 3, 2009 at 10:54 PM

    Talofa Shalom,
    Wow what an amazing piece of writing. You are really good at retelling one of my favourite fairytales, Cinderella. I liked the way you read with a nice clear voice. Keep up the good work Shalom and i can't wait to see more of your work on your blog.

    Love Mrs Tuala

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  2. AnonymousAugust 4, 2009 at 4:06 PM

    Hi Shalom

    We really loved to hear the part in your story that told us how you waved your magic wand.

    From Ms Glaze

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  3. AnonymousAugust 5, 2009 at 4:09 PM

    Dear Shalom

    I liked your Spooky Night story and how you read with a clear voice.

    From Sosaia

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  4. AnonymousAugust 5, 2009 at 4:11 PM

    Dear Shalom

    I liked it when you said "Hi my name is Shalom" it was great.

    From Sela

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  5. JoshuaAugust 6, 2009 at 4:38 PM

    Hi Shalom,

    I really love your story.
    you have described it really well.
    Are you still going to finish off your
    story or are you going to finish
    it later.
    Well keep up the fantastic work.
    you are doing really well.

    God Bless.

    By Joshua.

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  6. SionaAugust 6, 2009 at 5:26 PM

    Hi Shalom,

    Good on you Shalom,keep up the good work.I am so proud of you.

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  7. Delwyn JarmanAugust 6, 2009 at 8:39 PM

    Dear Shalom,
    You sounded very mature when you read your story. I really enjoyed listening to you. It was such a well read story that I wanted to hear more.
    Keep up the good work.

    From Mr Jsrman

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  8. Little Voices, Little Scholars.August 7, 2009 at 2:39 PM

    Well done! Shalom,
    I like your clear speaking voice and your very good written story. Keep it up!

    Mrs She

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  9. joshuaSeptember 8, 2009 at 3:46 PM

    Dear Shalom,
    Your work looks so amazing.
    i AM GLAD THAT YOU
    HAVE DESCRIBED YOUR STORY WELL.

    kEEP UP THE GOOD WORK.
    GOD BLESS.

    bY Joshua

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