Thursday, December 4, 2014

Syriah's diver story


On a hot sunny day Tom jumped into the deep blue sea.  He saw a colourful fish and tried to catch it but he missed it.

Then he saw an octopus sitting on an old treasure box. Tom was scared and wanted to go home to his family.

By Syriah

Piripi's diver story


On a stormy day Toby jumped into icey cold dangerous water and saw sharks everywhere. 

By Piripi

Jazzelles diver story


On a hot sunny day Ben jumped into the deep blue sea and saw lots of colourful fish.  On the way to the bottom of the sea he saw an octopus sitting on a golden treasure box.  He had really mean eyes.  So Ben sneaked behind the seaweed.  Then the octopus wrapped its long tentacles around Ben and tried to strangle him. They had a fight but Ben won and got the treasure box.   Then the octopus drifted off.

By Jazzelle

Marika's diver story


On a sparkling twinkling starry night Mia the deep sea diver splashed into the shimmering sea.

Then she saw a musical golden treasure box with a rainbow octopus kissing it because he loved it so much. When Mia saw the treasure box she fell in love with it too.

Then Mia started to get closer and closer until the octopus noticed she was coming towards the treasure box.  The octopus was terrified because he had found it first.  The octopus had never, ever seen a human before so he cuddled Mia so tightly that she felt like bursting like a balloon.

By Marika

Amira's diver story


On a hot sunny day Ben the deep sea diver jumped into the huge swells.  Then, Oh No! a huge wave swept him away.  Ahhhh!  He tried and tried to pop his head up so that he could breathe.  But he just couldn’t. 

Then he saw an octopus sitting on a new shiney treasure box. Ben tried to get the octopus tentacles off the treasure box but they were sticky and an ugly pink.

Just then Ben went up to the octopus and said “your ugly”.  It was just to make him mad but it didn’t go as planned.

By Amira

Caleb's diver story


On a cold rainy day Mr R jumped into some gentle rippling waves.  The waves washed him in the bright and colourful sea with fish swimming all around him. 

When he sank to the bottom he saw a huge octopus sitting on a golden treasure box.  He tried to sneak up behind the octopus but it saw him and tried to strangle him with his eight long tentacles. They had a fight but Mr R tied up the octopus tentacles with his hands and took the treasure.

By Caleb

Pisirina's diver story


On a blistering hot day Tommy the deep sea diver jumped into the twinkling sea.  Tom saw lots of seaweed swishing backwards and forwards. 

Then he saw it! An octopus with beady eyes was sitting on an old rusty treasure box.  It was filled with pearls and money. 

The octopus was so selfish he didn’t want to share.  Then suddenly the octopus wrapped its gooey tentacles around Tommy, so Tommy stretched up his arms and tied the octopus up like ‘dippity dog’

Tommy was so excited he cried “finally the treasure is mine!” and he quickly excaped from the octopus.

By Pisirina