Friday, November 29, 2013

Hinerangi's forest story

video
Hinerangi has written lots of interesting detail about how she ended up at the beach!  If you like her story please leave her a comment.

Wednesday, November 27, 2013

Makayla's forest story

Makayla wanted to type her story like a real book, all on her own. If you like her story please leave her a comment.

On a sunny day there was a family of four that was going camping  in  a leafy forest. Suddenly they saw a broken  bridge  that leads they’re  way  to their camping spot. Sadly, now they  can't  go camping. Then one of the daughters saw the sign saying  ‘Do not go here there are  snakes!’ Then she ran to tell her family. They ran quickly because  they were scared, and they were saying “Argh”. The family said we are never going camping again!

By Makayla

Kayzjahs Forest story

video
Kayzjah made a lovely start to her story and used her imagination about what she would see in the forest.  If you like her story please leave her a comment.

The Forest

Room 7 have been learning how to recraft their work.  They wrote a piece of writing completely independently then worked with a friend to make it even better.  They added lots more details and punctuation.  They then had to draw a picture to match their own story.  And lastly they have shared it with our lovely audience - YOU!   If you like their stories please leave them a comment.